Comments on: The Cutting Goodbye

By: Lark

Lark — Fri, 09 Jul 2010 15:41:42 +0000

Thank you very much, David. I appreciate your kind comment and you taking the time to read it.

By: David Sobkowiak

David Sobkowiak — Fri, 09 Jul 2010 14:51:59 +0000

This is a great tale. I feel drawn in to their pain and relationship and the ending moves you with its suddenness and finality. What a great read! Thanks for sharing it!!!

By: Lark

Lark — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 00:07:38 +0000

Thank you so much Shelly and Tia for reading and commenting!! I appreciate your kind comments.

By: Shelly

Shelly — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 23:27:34 +0000

That is a very interesting story! Very intense… I like the way you swirl around your words and the scene!

By: TiaB

TiaB — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 23:23:11 +0000

Oh that’s so beautiful and sad. Really well done.

By: Jeremy Shipp

Jeremy Shipp — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 23:00:38 +0000

This is a fantastic story. I love your poetic prose and your rhythm. The story is emotional, in a complex and realistic way. Awesome job.

By: Donnie

Donnie — Fri, 04 Sep 2009 02:57:53 +0000

Lark – “Cutting Goodbye” turned out very well. Very emotional – heartfelt. I like this one a lot.
~Donnie